Rebel by 20...

To the people who claim to be saints,
And to the people who claim to be priests.
To the people who wear saffron,
And to the people serving as messengers of GOD.
To the people who change color like chameleon,
And to the people who in real are hypocrites.
I claim to be a Rebel
A Rebel by 20.


What religion do you talk of, I ask
when your thoughts are evil and satanic.
Which peace are you trying to spread,
having a clasp-knife beside your torso.
What tolerance are you trying to teach,
when bigotry is all you preach
To you, I claim to be a Rebel
A Rebel by 20.


To their distress and misery,
they seek the ‘so called’ God.
In the pangs of separation and desolation,
they piety the ‘so called’ God.
How pretentious & superficial their way of living,
rebuking the penniless beggar after snubbing & kicking.
To you, I claim to be a Rebel
A Rebel by 20.


To my mates who claim to be friends,
And to my friends who claim to be brothers.
To the one busy with his girl-friend,
while I face alone the tornado.
To the one enjoying the status of celebrity,
while I sulk alone the ignominy.
To you, once a friend, I claim to be a Rebel
A Rebel by 20.


To the heart that once loved me,
I see the disavowed arrogance.
To the heart that talked of happiness,
I see the subtle shift towards wealth.
To the heart that promised unconditional love,
I see the impassive callousness.
To you, once a sweetheart, I claim to be a Rebel
A Rebel by 20.


The game is not about becoming somebody,
it is about becoming nobody.
The game is not about defeating them,
it is about winning with my defined rules.


As I pass them, I hear whispers,
they call me a ‘Rebel’.
But I am not a Rebel
Without a cause.

13 comments:

  1. Rebel by 20---an amazing piece of poetry...mst say,,,
    stanza 2 reminds me of the malicious speech by varun gandhi..
    nd u probably hav potrayed ur thoughts in the best possible manner...hats off to u for tht..

    stanza 4,, again a gud one ,,depicts reality..
    well all in all ,,,a marvellous piece of wrkk,,,keep up the gud wrk yaar..

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  3. Seems as if you are a born rule breaker. anyways nice piece of poetry. many people feel awful about the system but only a few dare to condemn it. Nice attempt.

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  4. Too good buddy. The way you portrayed your thoughts is commendable. You've chosen the wrong profession i must say :P you are a very good writer.I CLAIM TO BE YOUR FAN NOW..

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  5. excellent poetry now u should become world famous poet i must say anyways u r genious had soft to u

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  6. wah sahil ! maine toh 1st time visit kiya ur blog. kamaal kar diya. i mean,amazing !. ab shanky hindi mein , u in english ab sumit bansal ji ko boldo ki woh french mein poetry start karde. college mein skit ki jagah jate jate KAVI SAMELAN ho jayega. nywaz !! was kiddin. its really good yar. keep it up. Sneh

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  7. great man..it was jus amazin..really liked ur thoughts..liked ur way f presentin dem..keep them comin..dont go on n be a rebel in infy..lol..cheers
    MOHIT

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  8. very well....gud thoughts and gud imagination..
    keep it up sahil...

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  9. the things u've said in the frnd n the sweetheart...amazing...
    waise the whole piece f writing was great!
    congratulations..

    Swati Gupta

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  10. :-0 gosh.. ur so versatile n intelligent. 1 toh engineer ho uparse u even write such great stuff.. ur seriously a genius!

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  11. whew!!
    so I'd have commented on this post 10 minutes ago, but only if i could quit reading it over again. =)
    you've intricately described the very sanctimony of human existence today!
    sad, yet true. An opener indeed!

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  12. A rebel to me is the one who does not 'likes' to say 'No' but 'practically learns' it....
    .....In order to understand things going on in your life, one has to turn away from them on occasion....and it is good to know that you dont want to follow the pattern which people follow like slaves....... you dont want to be made a victim and do not want to accept anyone's definition of your life.....you want it to define it yourself.....GREAT..

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  13. Makes me wonder what kind of a rebel you are, a rebel to the system, a rebel to the religion, a rebel to the friend, a rebel to the sweetheart. Seems like you have defined your own rules in life and will always follow that no matter what comes in between.....

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